I asked again, you again denied. And there was silence, all over again.
Why do you do this each time, asking me what’s going on? You’d said. I didn’t know what to say.
I am tired of this, you said, almost angry. I failed to understand what that meant.
Tired of what? Was it me or was it us? Say it. Oh, I so wanted you to accept rather than killing me each day.
Sitting next to you, on the cliff there, with feet dangling off the edge.
Watching your hair blowing in the wind. It seemed almost romantic.
And yet, everything was hollow, just like my heart. Turned upside down.
The last traces of something that used to be there, was dripping away. Was love there or it wasn’t anymore?
I was sure once, but right then, I was not so sure.
You looked at me suddenly. Like nothing was ever wrong. Like everything was just the same.
But tell you what? I didn’t tell you. I didn’t tell you that it was too late.
That I knew now what you’d kept from me. That I knew where you went.
Each time, I’d believed when you’d said, you couldn’t come. I’d believed when you’d said, please.
I was a fool to not see it then. But how could I have when it was so perfectly concealed.
I saw the look that said something, eyes not so betraying as your words.
I saw what he meant to you, and I saw it right through you.
I wanted to know, if it was me you were thinking of or him, while you were sitting next to me.
But those smiles always mislead me and it deceived me once again.
Your fingers were placed just inches away yet so distant they seemed to me.
I reached out my fingers to feel yours but somehow you knew because that’s what we always did.
And I couldn’t stop but watch how you slowly curled your fingers away.
Taking away what little was left of me.
I wish, I could hold them for the last time, in that moment, that day.
You looked at my face then studying those features as though you’d never seen me before.
Your gaze halted a little too long on my lips before returning to my eyes.
In that moment, I swear, I so wanted you, to kiss you, hold you and make you stay.
But you turned away just the instant when I moved a bit close.
I could feel the pain of losing, in that moment and so I cried.
It was not just you that you took away, but a part of me that you ripped apart.
Sitting there, sitting right next to you. I was thinking for the hundredth time what could’ve gone wrong.
We were so in love. But I guess it was just me, holding onto something that was long gone.
We were together, for twelve years, and for a hundred and twelve I’d dreamt.
Right then, a matter of twelve minutes seemed like ages to bear.
Without looking at me, you’d said there was another, I couldn’t see if you were happy or sad.
The words had not a pinch of pain while my eyes almost flooded with tears.
I’d watched you get up and walk away, leaving me angry and mad.
Not a reason, no explanation was given, none that I could ask for.
I’d lived a million memories in that moment and I knew that was all left.
And no matter what you’d said or done, but, in that moment, I swear I wanted you back.
This is what I want to learn from you. To touch one’s heart through words, those magical words.
I loved this post. ❤ ❤ ❤
The pain the girl went through, the rage, the confusion, the 'Whys', I could feel them.
With every post of yours, I am falling more and more in love with this place, your blog. 🙂
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Thank you, Aditi. It was more from ‘his’ POV. But I like that you like it, nonetheless. It’s a pleasure to have you around often. 🙂
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On rereading this, I’m wondering what made me say ‘the girl’ in my first comment. It clearly is from the boy’s perspective. Gosh! Silly me! 😀
I remember I read this before. I read it right now and I can read it again and again.. I felt the emotions running through me. Beautiful ❤
Ah, your words mean a lot, always. Thanks Neeraj.
Well, this is a fantastic bit of writing! So powerful and emotional, something that most of us can relate to. You bring so many emotions to the fore here and it feels so raw and was heart rending…beautiful writing my friend.
What can I say? Its just that moment when you write better than you thought you ever could. It seems almost miraculous at times when I re-read most of my blogs and wonder if I really wrote them.
I am glad you approve of it, J.
Aptly put.. loved it 🙂
Hey Supriya. So good to see you. How’ve you been girl and what you been upto?
I am doing good.. 🙂 how about you ?
Hey doing good too.. Its been long before I could write back to you.
That truly was such a beautiful post, absolutely loved the narrative style that you employed there, slowly building up the emotions and ending the post wonderfully well…
Somehow, even after reading it like a few hundred times, this is one of those posts that didn’t strike a chord with my heart but I am so delighted to know it did with many other friends like yourself. Thank you sharing your thoughts.
Touching….pain of parting is awful..i do have experienced it 🙂
Its a part of each one of us’ life, I believe and also what defines us. Thanks Sunil.
Having is not the same thing as yearning, an exquisite tapestry that you have painted here…I identify with this pain. Been there, living it:)
My words with you dearest. Glad you approve of the post. I received a lot of personal replies recounting such experiences from readers about how much the post touched them. There is nothing more satiating for a writer.
Have a peaceful weekend!
I was deeply touched by the emotion that found life within your words, though sad, you have written a gem! I love what you write and how you deliver their spirits life in every line. Blessings and hugs to you. One door closes and another opens, the faith in your heart will be rewarded soon in a wonderful way!
How’ve you been, Wendell? You always perfectly word it what I intend to write. And yes, Faith, perhaps, is all you hold on to when your heart is shattered. And pick up those pieces and move on.
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