Lived stranded,
for far too long,
accepting,
all that came along
until I met you!
♥
The moment I set eyes on you
is the only moment I’ve lived
in a long long time
A nice warm feeling it was,
and I was cold and numb
this far, I had nowhere to go
But now, I was finally home
♥
A feeling like those
of revisiting old photos
like walking in the fields
you once did as a kid
Like the first touch, the first kiss,
like snow melting
on your skin
♥
Nothing else mattered
because I knew I had found
what my heart had longed for.
I was finally home.
~~~~~~~
Asha Seth
“The moment I set eyes on you… Is the only moment I have lived “… Just this one line has made him so so special and you so happy !
Wish if it’s really true 😄
Awesome asha !
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It’s been such a long time haven’t seen you. It’s a work of mere fiction that I’d definitely like to associate with some person, sone event in life. 😃
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This would be the best possible dream getting into reality 😄
You’ve transcend the level of your writing beyond my imagination ! Just loved reading it 😊😊
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I’m most flattered and elated too. Rahul 😉
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, Simon. Welcome here. 😃
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Thank you so Much Queen Asha 🙂
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You’re a sweetheart. Be happy my dear.😃
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Beautiful Asha!
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Thank you, Wendell. 🙂 How’ve you been, buddy?
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first touch, first kiss, love explained. beautifully and with a clean sensitivity.
Ghalib said, “dil e nadaN tujhe hua kya hai, ya ilahi yeh majra kya hai. I think you nailed it. The life lived in a moment when your eyes met!.
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I am a fan of Ghalib sahab. My dad used to read me his poems when I was young. Have such profound memories.
Appreciate your humble thoughts, Shakil. 🙂
How goes the day?
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Oh.i feel dt i am suffering in that situation.what has ur poem remimnded me my memories?nice one poem.
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Oh. I hope the phase is over and now youre left with only happiness. Aruna ❤
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It is true.
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🙂
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Good morning…for me home is most dearest and loved place even than the seven wonders of the world…there are sweet and unforgettable memories etched in its every nook and cranny.
It would very painful to leave it as it happens in life of every girl …hope you understand what i mean.
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Oh yes, I do understand, totally. 🙂 You miss it most when you have to leave it to accept another family.
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Beautiful!! These lines got me thinking of my lady and back when i met her. – Cezane
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Wow! How nostalgic that must have been! Riding the old memories bike on the love lane. Cezane ❤
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And thank you for that, taking me way back to this moment. ☺ – Cezane
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You are welcome here, Cezane.
Always ❤
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Such beauty in these words. Lovely!
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Nice poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautifully written, keep writing.
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Pleasure to have you here. Vikas 🙂 I sure plan to write much more. Keep sharing your thoughts.
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The words and thoughts just were right in the flow. Simple and more beautiful with ever line 🙂 That’s lovely Asha 🙂
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Well, I like your thoughts, Nomad. We should talk more. 😉 And well, happy to have you here. 🙂
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We sure should or wait will 😉 Glad to be here!
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Yes, and I’ll bring along a good book to read out my favorite excerpts to you and you can do the same. 😉
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Asha, I love your words they bring smiles alive within! Simply beautiful!
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Thank you, Wendell. You’re kind. 🙂 Have a wonderful week.
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Wonderful poem ! Cheers 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by. 🙂
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Okies. But I’m still here, reading posts 😂👍
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Ahh! Hope you enjoy your time here. And I’ll make happy conversation. 🙂
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I am always game for an interesting conversation! 😊👍
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That’s good to know. All we need now is a cup of tea and nice breeze. 🙂
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Where I stay it’s always breezy! 😂
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That’s one thing accomplished then. 😉
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Well, there is a tea villa next to my place. So that’s two on two. Just let me know when! 😉👍
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Absolutely beautiful feeling painted by your words.Jal
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Thank you, Michael. Happy weekend. 🙂
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Happy weekend to you Asha.
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🙂 Thank you.
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This is really very nicely expressed. The feeling of going back to home. 🙂
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Thank you, Ashish. Your thoughts really mean a lot. 🙂
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Thank you. I read few of your poems and really liked them. Will be a regular visitor at your blog. 🙂
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Your comments delight me, Ashish. An attempt to write is sometimes better than an attempt to write better. And you made this so much more real to me. 🙂
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My pleasure. Keep writing always. 🙂
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Will do. You’re kind. 🙂
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“The moment I set eyes on you
is the only moment I’ve lived
in a long long time”
Sharp like knife edge..
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Fantastic observation, Keval. That bit is my most favorite part in the poem.
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superb
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Sanjeet 🙂
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Very beautiful Asha😊
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Glad to have you here, Divya. And thank you for sharing your thoughts. How have you been?
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I could take this two ways home in the physical somewhere warm and cozy or in the sense of your heart has found its home with the one and only
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I love the way your mind’s working. Whether it’s my words doing it or something else, I would love to know.
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lets start with your words and build on that lol but there are way I thought of on this for sure
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I love this, it makes me feel all warm and in this weather, that is a bonus! Did you get my email by the way?
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Nice!!
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A very fine poem. Thank you for sharing, Asha :))
-Naima
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Pleasure Naima. Glad you like it!
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