Fire burnt the logs through the night,
and all that was left behind were the dying embers…
the warmth of your touch sinking deep under my skin,
you were the fire slowly turning me to ash…
under the starless sky, we lay,
counting beats that slowed down,
like twigs turning to embers…
♥
as you traced your finger across my lips and down the neck,
the fire dancing in your gaze,
reduced me to a mere puppet,
ruled by emotions, craving for more…
as the waves collided with the shore and parted, time and again,
so did we, our skins, our bodies, our breaths,
you, giving away, all of you…
me, holding onto what little was left of me…
♥
drawing circles on your skin, watching you sleep,
long did I hope the night wouldn’t end
as I stared at the dwindling fire,
that rehearsed our tale, depicted our fates…
and before the rising sun could calm the restless waves,
you were gone.
leaving behind an unanswered enigma,
a pale morning, vague imprints on the sand,
and a heart as cold as ash…
♥
ash left behind from the dying embers,
just like the memories, left behind by you.
~~~~~~~
Asha Seth
Sensuous and then, achingly beautiful….
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This was so beautiful indeed!
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Well Asha, this is quite a surprise! A look into the sensual side of your mind 😉
Also a bit of truth interwoven into these words I sense, for the depth of this poem seems to come from some old memories. And that makes it special, a little personal but also beautiful!
Love and disappointment are more often used together rather than apart. This poem ends on a similar note. But alas, certain realities of life and the lessons they come from are such broken relationships.
And as you poem suggests, dying embers come from things that burned bright once. And everything that burns close, always hurts and leaves a mark!
Lovely poem, absolutely loved it 💕
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I love it when something leave behind marks of it having a touch of being personal. 😛
This is a favorite in many ways. Night, stars, seas side, and fire. I love this concoction sinfully too much.😍 And wanted to write a poem around such a romantic setting.
Love and disappointment, come a long way with me and somehow always find a spot in my works. I’m humbly touched by your words, Advaita. 💞
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Yes, indeed the poem is set in an insanely romantic mood. I hope you write something as beautiful as this, that has love with a happy ending too! 😜👍
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I’ll certainly weave in that flavour. It’s caused enough interest. 🙌
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It has peaked the interest I’d say! 😉
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oh sure yes! 🙂
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This is beautiful. You’re so good! I will catch up on more of your posts soon – and I’m really looking forward to it 🙂
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Thanks, Kim ❤ and you're always welcome here. Hope you're doing well. 🙂
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Writing love as touch d hieght of soul’s sky n fly according of our heat as free.come,dear !! Create a new rainbow with dreams of seven colours.who wil look after those guys as thinking dt fall in love is d c reason of failure n deprresion.come dear,let us a new song of love who is sung by flying dove in endless sky.
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🙂
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Lovely bt as sad poem.love converts all feelings n memories into ashes.raakh ke dher me shola he na chingaari…jaane kya dhoondhti rahati he ye aankhe mujhme….
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Your compliments make me happy. The poem especially. 🙂
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It is sad to watch the fire of emotion of love fade away to nothing. A amazing poem.
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Thanks, John. Beautiful things must never end, but they do.
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Yes they do. We must make the good days longer and the bad days less.
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Darn true. And stick on longer to the sweet memories. 🙂
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I agree Asha.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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Sublime post… splendid take down the love lane.. Cezane
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Thank you, Cezane. I am a perennial lover of seas and skies. I always try and write about them. This is a personal favorite, in that context. 🙂
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Really Asha !?!?
Well, your comment make me feel peculiar.
Actually I was “Long Lost” but now I have returned “Finally home”
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That’s just lovely the way you put it. Keval 🙂
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As always, Simple and Sharp.
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Hey Keval, How have you been buddy? So glad to see you here after so long. 🙂
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Hi, Fab blog! I am still in the very early stages – 4 months old. Just making efforts to link in with fellow bloggers to improve our followers and get the word out there for us both. I would appreciate you having a peek at my blog, as I have published several posts. Feel free to like, comment, follow or just take a peek. Thank you 🙂
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This is one very beautiful piece…the words are so well crafted. Love it!
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Oh! And another blogger friend. 🙂 Thank you for finding me and sharing your thoughts, Emmanuel. I just smiled widely at your happy comments. 😛 Hope you’re doing well.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you, Paul. For sharing on your wall. Hope you’re doing well. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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🙂
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🙂
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great post with a lot of value
Alex Moses
https://alifeanswer.com/
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Ash as memories, great metaphor ☺
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I thought so too. 😉
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The last phrase is perfect.
Memories are like ghost … fading like dying embers …
So, true.
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Yes, fading but never leaving. 🙂 Glad that you could spare time and share your thoughts, Sherrie. ❤ Hope you're making the most of this day. 😛
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Romantic erotic and metaphoric all rolled into one … and sexy too.
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Ah! Thank you, Jerry. 🙂 This made my day. And yes, this poem reminds me of those solitary evenings when you crave the company of someone you love and wish you could conjure them from thin air. 😛
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This sounds like you were talking from a real experience you had in the not so recent past….
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An acute observation, I must say. But it’s from a long time ago.This was written sometime in 2012, I only reblogged it recently. 🙂
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but it was someone who touched you deeply
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You may rightly say so. 🙂
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was that a sigh we just heard??
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😉 Memories.
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yes that was a sigh we heard with a kiss to the memories …nice
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😉
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you are a sensitive soul
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how are you today Asha?
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Doing well, Jerry. Thank you. 🙂 Hoping to do a book review today. 😉
What’s up with you?
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A book review? What kind of book? I’m good . Busy working on a business blog…working on a background once I settle on that then I will work on my first post
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That sounds nice. 🙂
I recently finished reading a Stephen King book. So have to review that. But presently at work so might do it later in the day. What sort of a business blog?
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Customer service consultant blog
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Well, that does sound businessy! 😛
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Lol now who’s funny
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😀 😛
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The way you described it was classy and personal
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Personal, yes, but in a slightly different manner. Just created a setting and atmosphere for the feelings to fit in. 🙂
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I see
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🙂
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Yes, Ruma. That’s what it subtly implies. How sometimes people leave without so much as a word. I like your presence here, my dear. 🙂 Howve you been?
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I can relate it to not just someone leaving in morning…but leaving you in life , for good…..
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🙂
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Very nice Asha! Very nice, mysterious and romantic. I really enjoy you words, you can always conjure strong feelings from your readers by your words…lovely.
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I was actually going to give it a different end but stuck with this.
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It is wonderful as it is my friend, I wouldn’t change it for anything
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beautiful expressions………..
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Thank you Syed!
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Welcome…… 🙂
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