Hold me tonight
keep me in sight
let me not escape
don’t allow me be prey
take me away
let me not fall in love again
♥
Hug me tight
confine me if you might
let me not run astray
don’t allow me be prey
take me away
let me not fall in love again
~~~~~
Asha Seth
😍
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Amazing lines.lovely n innocent poem.
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Thank you.
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Welcome dear.
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This is so cute….
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Thank you dear. 🤓
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while her fingers,
entwined with mine;
her warm breaths
teased my, restraints.
and while her, heart
adjusted to the
spaces between,
my heartbeats;
she, with quivering lips,
punctuated her sighs
with lies, and said
don’t let me,
fall in love
again.
WoW!!! beautiful…….loved this!!! 🙂 🙂
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That’s so damn romantic and betraying, all at once. How you do it! 😄
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oh you are so kind……..thank you so much…………but all credit goes to your wonderful poem…… 🙂 🙂
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Thank you. That means a lot. 🤓
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always a pleasure reading you!!! 🙂 🙂
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That made my day. 🤓
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🙂 🙂
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Hello Asha, tell me please – to whom is the poem “Take me Away” addressed?
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Ahh! Finally! I was hoping someone to ask this. First tell me, Ian, what do you think? To whom is it addressed?
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Perhaps, and most likely, to your spirit self – what some would call your higher self. However, that is logical and there could be many other answers – as many as there are people even 🙂
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You’re right, Ian. To the writer, it’s a close friend, perhaps, a soul mate, someone the protagonist can’t imagine life without.
It surely can mean a lot of different things to different people. 🙂
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One life one love! Beautiful. 🙂
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Yes, my friend. Or so I think. 🙂
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🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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Wow. This is great. 👏🤗
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Thank you. It means a lot to me.😄
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This is a lovely creation… 🙂 Liked it a lot… 🙂
And wishing you a very happy new year… Sorry for the late wish… hope you are doing good… 😉
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Thank you, Ashish. Your humble wishes made my day. Wish a blessed year ahead. 😃
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Thank you for you wishes Asha… 🙂
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take me away
i had fall in love with this poem ❤
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Thank you, Vinayak.
Welcome to my blog. 🙂
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thnxzz asha 🙂
hope to see some more beautifull poems from you…. #hope
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Oh yes. I solemnly swear to keep you delighted. 😛
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😀 😀 😀
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Amazing
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you, Grand.
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You are welcome! Happy New Year! And, as a footnote: https://www.reference.com/beauty-fashion/calgon-away-mean-4ebd8b9657589fd4
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Happy 2017, dear. How was Christmas and the holidays?
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Very quiet. And, I liked it that way. And yours?
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Quiet with little fun. It’s always been like that.
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A good day to watch “Home Alone” and the National Lampoon movie and maybe Wonderful Life and a few others. 🙂
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Home Alone is such a heartwarming film. I love it too.
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Reblogged this on PoArtry and commented:
Beautiful lines of Poetry
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Thank you for sharing it. Welcome to my blog. 🤓
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Nice to read
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Thank you. 🤓
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A beautiful poem !
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Pleasure to read your thoughts, Anil. Thanks. 🤓
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Welcome! I take this opportunity to say – Happy new year to you, in advance!!
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Thank you, Anil. Wish you loads of happiness. 🙂
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So beautiful – love it
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Thank you, Arrwen.
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So welcome 😊
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Lovely Poem..and even better to know some good poet from Rajkot
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Thank you. 🤓
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Beautiful. Just simply beautiful!
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Thank you🤓
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You’re welcome my love.
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🙂
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No words to share?😋
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You are seeing me smile while reading it, do you need words?
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Intense. And not to miss, touche! 😋 And by the by, just a smile could mean a lot of things! 🤓
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Well, my thoughts reached the shore while reading this, silence. So I smiled 🙂
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I guessed otherwise. Never mind. A writer’s mind strays. 😋
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Ahah, don’t go there. I refrain from diving in that well. Bdw, someone asked me why am I so negative about love and I replied I don’t have problems with love, I have problems with what people have made of love… what’s your prob?
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It’s not a problem. It’s a perspective. And it varies. For me, love doesn’t exist beyond family.
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I find family love more like Stockholm syndrome. And I am making this statement based on my experience ofliving away from family. I don’t know :). Everyone has a definition of love, for me it was concept, so I penned it in form of conversation..
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Such lovely poem! Great job 🙂
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Thank you, Aanchal.
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This poem just confirms what I have always said…if a man truly takes care of a woman and cherish her like she ask in this poem she will go with him to the ends of the earth. Very nice poem.
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Thanks Jerry. How do you do?🤓
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I am good my friend . How are you doing?
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Caught in a frenzy. It’s year end and soon you’ll know what I mean. Just watch out for my next post. How are your days?
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Busy and good. Now I am in the planning stages for 2017.
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Cool. What plans then?
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More writing, and looking at plans at a career change work wise.
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That’s a big change. All the best, Jerry.
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I would like your thoughts on this …https://bklynboy59.wordpress.com/2017/01/11/do-men-get-an-unfair-rap-of-being-the-strong-silent-type/
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I’ll check.it soon Jerry.
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Wow …that’s so beautiful as if written for me 😊…I can’t stop smiling after reading this
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Happy to know you relate. Kiran🤓
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Your heart and spirit always brings out inspiring words to dance on paper! You are such a good writer my sister, keep sharing what comes from your heart so selflessly! You always bring smiles alive!
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Thank you, Wendell. Your words always inspire me to do good, be good.
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Lovely
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Thanks, Shaggy!🤓
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