as the key clicked
into the lock
he stood up excited
to finally see her
to be with her
♥
she hurriedly wiped
her kohl-stained eyes
the memories
of the finality
still burning in her mind
♥
a weak smile
replaced her sobs
the truth need not be sensed
the story need not known
and hugged him
as he jumped into her arms
♥
melancholy well concealed
didn’t go unnoticed
his tail wagged
harder than ever
as he bounced
about her
♥
he licked her cheeks
and cuddled like a kid
tilted his head
and peered at her face
he felt what she didn’t
her tired breathing
the numb cajoling
♥
words defy
eyes don’t
when silence speaks tonnes
why truth be told?
aware she wasn’t fine
and knew he had to fix
whatever was killing her
whatever wasn’t all right
~~~~~
Asha Seth
Amazing write Asha!!!
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Thank you, Wendell.
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Last paragraph came out really well💚💚
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Oh thank you!
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And this has got to be one of my favorties.💕
Need not give the reason.🐕❤️
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Haha! Thank you. We all need a reason to live. For some it’s humans, for some others, it’s furred and feathered ones’ love. 🤗
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They are!💕🐕💕
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Moving and poignant. I believe you’ve written before about dogs, your dog Dollar, to be specific. This one too shows just how much they mean to you, pets.
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Wondeful observation, my friend. Yes, I’ve written about dogs often. Dollar passed away at the age of 4 when I was 11. We have Alfey now who’s also just as loving, just as charming. He’s almost 6 years old. I.dont remember a time when I didn’t have the love of dogs. They mean so much. So much.
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I can see that. Having pets is such a joy. I’ve never had the pleasure of keeping a pet, but I loved others’. They teach you so much and the love they give you… Endless! Be happy for thier company is priceless 😊
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Truly. Madly. Deeply. Is how they love us. 🤓
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True that 😀
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Words defy
Eyes don’t.
Just loved it.
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So true, isn’t it?
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Yea,
It is.
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🤓😃
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Wow lovely writing Asha. First thought it was a baby and then read about the tail wagging and then understood it was about the pet. I cannot stand a dog. Am damn scared. But can understand the true love it shows.
Meena
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Many including my best friend is perennially scared of dogs and other pets. So I feel how you feel. As for me, I’ve lived with them for all my life and thats how I’ve grown so fond of them. Can’t imagine life without them, or books. 😋😍
I love your imagination, Meena. Pretty cool.
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Loved your prose. They drew me right in. I could imagine myself with Sissy (our chocolate lab). She doesn’t miss a thing and is always there to offer unconditional love.
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Oh wow. That’s lovely for you to feel this poem as your own. What else could a writer ask.for! Love to Sissy. 😍😘
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Can you narrate the most happy moment you had with Alfey
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This poem came from a personal instance with Alfey. He always knows what I’m thinking, what I’m feeling. It’s very much like he’s reading my mind.
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Feeling nice to know …this is the thing I love most about beloved pets …they are completely dedicated to us as we are dedicated to them too.
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I’ve always felt they are quite much into us than we are into them. They give more than 100% and we cannot, even if we tried. Sadly!
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That’s the thing I love very much.
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Does he insist on a early morning walk …I go for a morning walk in the gliding centre ground …I see many pet dogs along with their masters.
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Oh yes, that’s him and all dogs. 🤓
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Preparation leave just three weeks remain for 4th sem university exams ….Engrossed more in studies. ..feeling nice to have a short break with you
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Same here, love. Do well. I know you will. Study hard. Need my help? Let me know.
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Yes I got 8.90 SGPA last semester. ..hoping to improve more …sure …if I need help I won’t hesitate to ask …that’s so sweet of you to extend a helping hand dear Asha Di.😊
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Always, sweety.
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Gazing at my empty fish tank
Past memories
Prick my mind
Like thorns
It was a wonderful home
For my pet fish Nemo
I still remember day
When I saw him
In a fish shop
I couldn’t resist myself
Taking him home
His home was equipped
With a oxygenator and temperature controller
That took care of him in changing environments
I used to feel proud
When visitors used to gaze at fish tank in delight
Appreciating me for my work
I was only the one who used to feed him
After returning from
I remember how anxiously
He waited for me
He licked my fingers with love
Whenever I feed him
He suddenly passed away
One night whitout informing me
It was very painful
To leave him in a well nearby
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This is as sad as this is sweet. I can somehow never think of a thing sadder than losing a beloved pet.
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You know my mother is insisting me to keep new fish …but somehow I avoid her …as memories of Nemo are still green in my mind…I still feel him there even though its empty
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I can understand the reservation. No one can take the place of the one in our heart.
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This was beautiful ~
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Thank you very much.
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sooooo cute like puppy
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Yes.
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I just read this…and the beginning sounded eerily like my tweet of today! What a delightful surprise as I read on. Beautiful writing 🙂
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I think it’s lovely how some thoughts from 2 different people match at similar levels. 🙂 Always a pleasure to have you here, Sonya.
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is this the reason why you are my favorite ??
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Am I missing something here, Supreet?
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you are missing the context of my comment 😉 someone who writes so beautifully on importance of pets . now that makes you one of my favorite writer..
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Oops! I miss the soul of the words sometimes. Duh! Yes. 😛
And now it means a lot to hear your positive thoughts. You’re humble. 🙂
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asha.. keep touching my soul like this by your words..
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Haha! Sure. That’s a promise. 🙂 How else can I claim to be happy!!
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This is the first time I read a poem like this about pets , yet it makes so much sense. I had two cats like that. Amazing.
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I’m sure cats are adorable too. But have a dog for a pet, Jerry. And life will be changed for good. This I promise you.
Thank you for stopping by and reading through. 🙂
How’ve you been?
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I’m good enjoying life one day at a time
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Oh, that’s brilliant. Sometimes, not fretting about future while it shapes up for itself is for the good. 🙂
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BEAUTIFUL, ASHA! 😍
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Delighted to hear from you, Anj. 😉
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Our pets definitely know what we are going through and though they can’t say anything, their mere presence is enough. Beautifully penned!
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Dogs have been an indispensable part of my life. A lot I’ve learned from them, a lot gained. I owe them big time. And I love to write about them. Yes, through their silence they touch our hearts, and that I feel is grand. Thanks, Swalia. 🙂 ❤
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