Luck hid in the dark
beyond bliss
Refused to show up
when I chased it
♥
Love followed
a different melody
Each time
I played it
♥
Trust took shelter
in the street
Of which
I’d long gotten rid
♥
Pride blinked me away
wished me ill
When I knocked on its doors
hungry and beat
♥
Hope embraced me
when I was numb and frosty
It took my hand
offered warm company
~~~~~
Asha Seth
Asha Seth 
Beautiful. I love it.
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Super. 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Wow…this is so good…great poem!!
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Welcome to The Musing Quill. And glad to hear your thoughts. 🙂
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I am glad too…i am a fan!!
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Wow. I’m honored. 😉
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Bingo! Agreed
Shreyans
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Hehe! 😀
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This is beautiful, Asha! ❤
Hope is what keeps us alive. If it weren’t for hope many of us wouldn’t be alive today. If it weren’t for hope human race, perhaps, would have depleted long back (I know this is the extreme I am talking about.) But hope is the foundation of every other emotion and feeling and if not hope then most of the emotions would have ceased to exist as well.
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Yes, I believe so too. When all ends, hope still fills in the voids and makes living possible.
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GURL. GURL. GURL. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. I CAN’T EVEN.
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Thank you very much. 😉
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Love love this! Hope is eternal
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Yes, Arrwen. 🙂
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😍😍😍
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Beautiful piece!!
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Thank you and welcome to The Musing Quill.
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Soooo good
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Thank you
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I just loved it….your thoughts are very clear.
shreyans
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Sometimes thoughts are clear, sometimes the words are. Only few times, both are in sync and some good pieces of writing are then born.
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Well … aren’t you clever. Girl, write with all your content!
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Hehe! Thanks much. And I must say I like your writings. Growing so addicted to them.
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This one’s a true beauty Asha 👍💖
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Thank you, Radhika. So happy to see you.
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Trust took shelter
in the street
Of which
I’d long gotten rid
Emotional lines…
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Yes, very. 🙂
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Indeed hope is what keeps us going. Such a beautiful poem!
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Hello there, Swalia. How are you, buddy?
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Am doing good and hope things are great at your end too!
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Yes, great and busy and that keeps me away for longer periods. How about you?
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Being busy is good. Have you got another job? If I am not wrong, you had posted about job search some time back, isn’t it?
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Yes. I did. And I’m happy it’s keeping me busy. I was so lost for that period without a job. Your wishes helped. Thank you so much.
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That’s good news. All the best!
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Thanks again.
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The last four lines!!!
Your poems amaze me everytime loved it❤…
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I’m so pleased to know that. You’re lovely. Thank you.
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