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Award-winning Indian Book Blogger
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An award winning book blogger, Asha is ranked among top 10 book bloggers of India. She has been blogging since 10 years and has reviewed more than 600 books. Her book blog 'missbookthief.com' has been awarded with many accolades including 'Best Indian Book Blog' by Indiblogger and 'Inspiring Book Influencer' by Crossword. She is also a poet, youtuber, and traveler. Notoriously known as 'The Book Thief', Asha lives in Mumbai, India, with her books and plants. Reach out for book collaborations and promotions.
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Loved it!! 👍
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Amazing story!
Your writing skill is very nice And the way you wrote this i really liked it.
Thanks for sharing this us.
Keep writing and blogging.
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Thanks!
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Awesome
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Thank you!
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This was intense!
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Thanks, Deb.
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You are a brilliant story teller and your narration keeps me engaged everytime in the way you use emotions that has a deep impact, Asha.
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I merely try, Vishal. Glad as always to hear your motivating thoughts. These days I try to write down every thought that grazes past me. Some become stories, some fit for late night revisits.
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Aaaahhh you’re so good!! From the beginning no less! “Even the midnight shadows had sought shelter.” I read your posts so quickly now because I’m always way to eager to find out what happens haha. You’re a fantastic writer! 🌹
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Delighted as always to hear from you, dear. Your words truly make me happy.
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It was beautiful, sad, and kind of scary at times. I didn’t know what would happen till the end. I love that. You are so talented. Just talented. I love it. Best piece I have ever read.
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Thank you for the ample motivation, Kath. 🙂
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You’re welcome Asha.
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Lovely buildup..the descriptions are impeccable, it’s a great job considering the simplicity of diction employed. Kudos!!
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Walt Whitman said, “Simplicity is the glory of expression.”
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Walt W. is your inspiration, and you are our’s : )
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That’s a wonderful thing to know.
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Beautifully written you kept me guessing!
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Hehe! That should be at the heart of every good story – to keep the reader guessing. Thanks, Mr Wrong.
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Strangely spooky!
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Haha! Thanks.
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A queer night indeed Asha. I loved your narrative. The words built up a web of eerie and imaginative atmosphere!
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Yeah, rainy dark nights play upon my mind many dark tales.
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Definitely creeptastic. Loved it.
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Thanks, Michelle. 🙂
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Awesome post Asha 😊. I just loved it so much !!
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I’m glad, Abhijith.
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😊
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Nice and eerie story, Asha. Loved the simplicity of words. Great post.
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Well, I loved writing it. Thanks, Kamal. Hope you’ve been well.
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Welcome Asha all good what about u
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Pretty okay too. Been trying to write more this month. Always hopeful.
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Welcome Asha and keep up the good work.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Welcome
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Hello Asha, probably I will read again to try and understand fully 😊
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Sure. As you please, Kurian.
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Thank you Asha. Clearly you are a blogger with exclusive talent and I am very happy to be a follower
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Also have a look at the flow of the person retiring to bed, then in couch in living room and then back into the bedroom to the bed.
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What about it, did you think?
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The suspense was well built and was gripping. The protagonist is courageous to step out in the balcony at that hour. One thing for your attention as the story ran in my imagination – the fourth para says a man looked through the window which means the house may be on the ground floor. The last para indicates that the protagonist walked into the balcony and looks down at the stranger in the street. It could be a villa too :-)… but just an observation.
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Well, the worst thing that can happen to a story is predictability. I like to keep my reader in puzzles. It may be a house with a window and a balcony both. Or a villa perhaps!
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taken, fits well then.
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Ah! Loved the narration, Asha. Those sentences just flow and before you even know, you are already in love with them, their structure.😍
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Thanks, Aditi. I long to hear from you. And it’s satisfying to know you like the writing.
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