woke up
from a dead slumber
to find myself
buried deep within
the womb of earth
rustic red smell
fill my nostrils
squirming limbless
beatless, breathless
a void, inside a void
wriggling, wrestling
maggots and worms
in the inside of my
sweaty palms
crawled
rocks in pebbles
lost in identity
render me vague
extinct, inexplicably
shoots like stars
tentacles or tendrils
growing up and above
free but trapped
there but unaware
unwelcoming
in their amidst
a dream within a dream
to last as long as they
~~~~~
Asha Seth
Khaak ho jayen ge ham tum ko khabar hone tak.
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I can’t stop diving in your posts Asha….such deep thoughts, amazing and creepy and …💀 💀 💀
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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This reminded me of a movie called inception
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The one starring Leonardo DiCaprio?
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Yes! Have you see it?
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Yes, it is one of my favorites.
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It is mine as well. Please tell me you have watched THE MATRIX
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Indeed, yes. Keanu Reeves is an all time favorite.
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Mine as well.
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Very nice! Visual and visceral, it gave me a shudder down my spine.
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I’d like to imagine myself under earth’s crust and to feel what it feels like to be there.
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Both claustrophobic and turbulent one would expect. That and very hot!
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Hehe! Yes. Have you changed your number? I tried sending messages that never went across.
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My phone stopped working when I came over, it wouldn’t even connect to the internet, a new number and an add to Whatsapp will be coming your way soon.
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Waiting then.
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list of hard words for me beautifully used 😛
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Hehe! Thanks.
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Artistic expression of what is means to be alive in a deep and meaningful way.
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And as one we never were but comfortably neglected the existence of.
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Is there a second verse? I think you ended it abruptly.
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I did it. On purpose!
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Wow, I like how this poem is very abstract
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Thanks, Kayla.
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Beautiful….
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Thank you. Welcome to The Musing Quill. 🙂
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😄 This is so good
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Thank you for stopping by. 🙂
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Wow Asha. Bukowski feel it had.
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Happy to know that. He is my star, through and through.
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Yes. I know. Keep writing.
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This is epic Asha!!❤❤😍Loved it so much!!❤❤
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Thanks, Riddhima. 🙂 Hope you’re well.
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I am!! Hope you’re good too.😊❤
Much love❤❤
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