तड़पती तरसती
उन निगाहों ने
मुस्कुराना छोड़ दिया
जिस दिन
उसने अपना घर, अपना देश
अपना आँगन छोड़ दिया
ठहरती फिसलती
उन क़दमों ने
खुशियां ढूँढना छोड़ दिया
जिस दिन
उसने अपना घर, अपना देश
अपना आँगन छोड़ दिया
रोती सिसकती
उन आँखों ने
सपने देखना छोड़ दिया
जिस दिन
उसने अपना घर, अपना देश
अपना आँगन छोड़ दिया
बेचैन सहमी
उन धड़कनों ने
चेहेकना छोड़ दिया
जिस दिन
उसने अपना घर, अपना देश
अपना आँगन छोड़ दिया
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This is my first published Hindi poem. And I am anxious to know what you think.
It is dedicated to women around the world who leave their own happy worlds behind to embrace what lies ahead in the next phase of their lives post marriage. Do share your thoughts.
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Asha Seth
Wahh
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I think you might like this book – “जिंदगी-एक सफर (Hindi Edition)” by निमेष त्रिपाठी.
Start reading it for free: http://amzn.in/cbPCCfs
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Heart touching poem… I think you should go through my blog once, I too write hindi poems!… Free to suggest, comment And follow ☺️
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Welcome to TMQ. Happy to have you over. Now I am going over at yours. 🙂
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YEAH.. Thanks a lot dear ✌️ 😇
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It was very nice Hindi poem… 🙂
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Thank you. Happy to hear your thoughts. 🙂
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Lol nice DP…
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Thanks. 🙂
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You write so well have got beautiful blog…
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Thanks again. I must be lucky today to have so many showers of appreciation.
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Lol pleasure do lies in appreciating beautiful souls…
You receive it back…
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Wonderful…. great writing…❤👌
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Thank you 🙂 Welcome to TMQ.
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TMQ…
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The Musing Quill 😉
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Ok…👍👍
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🙂
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Have you read my post….plz read and give your feedback…. thanks…
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Which one? Do share the link here please.
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Whoa, wow! This is quite something. Ecstatic and beautifully penned. 🙂
You mentioned you’re working on a Hindi Poem book, am I right? I am really looking forward to reading them.
Take Care.
And Keep writing. 🙂
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Hey there. Thank you very much for your motivating words. I am working on a collection of short stories but that is English. For Hindi, for now, I am only going to publish some poems and see how that goes.
I am also trying to sort the translation bit for them.
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Hey,
You’re welcome.
Yeah, you mentioned about the Hindi poems. But not about short stories. That’s very cool. Looking forward to reading them.
And please do publish the Hindi poems. You write quite well.
Ah, translation. Well, you’ll pull it off gracefully. So, best wishes to that. 😊
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Yes, Hindi poems blog pe publish karne ke liye aur short stories jiski ek collection print me publish hogi. That’s the plan as of now. Hindi poems for print publish, I haven’t given it much thought. Let’s see.
The translation is tiring. It’s getting to me. I hope to get through.
Thanks, man. 🙂
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Acha, I see. Either way, keep them amazing. You have a flare for it.
And I’ll be looking forward to reading both of them. Let me know when they are print published.
I can only imagine. If you need any help, let me know. I’m not that good, or any good, but I can try to help.
You’re welcome. 😊
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Actually, if you are good with Hindi, I might be able to use your help. And yes, I shall keep you updated about the print plans. Thanks again!
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I’m sort of ok-ok types with Hindi. But I can try, if that’s okay?
Sure, please do.
You’re welcome, again. 😊
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Why don’t you try this same poem and share it with me on themusingquillblog@gmail.com.
Let’s take it ahead from there.
I could use a pair of helping hands for the translation as long as the essence is retained. I hope you enjoy it. Do let me know if this would be okay.
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Sure. I’ll give it a try.
And yeah, I’ll get back to you if I have any concerns or likewise.
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Excellent!!!
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Thank you, Shaloo 🙂
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Bahot khoob
Good encourage to write hindi Kavita😃,
Badiya
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Thank you, Mayur 🙂
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This is fab! The enigma and magic of your words remain, be it in Hindi or English. Beautiful composition. Looking forward to read more from you.
Love
Riddhima
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You’re sweet as ever. Thanks, Riddhima. 🙂
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The pleasure’s all mine!😊❤
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Lovely 🙂
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For a first attempt, this is fabulous! Keep at it, girl!
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First attempt at publish, and I had shaky fingers like a novice. Been writing them since school. I have always loved writing in Hindi more than in English. Only for some reason never thought of publishing.
Thank you, Pradita 🙂 You’re my forever star.
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Anytime sweetheart. Write without fear here. This community is your best friend as far as writing is concerned
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Right you are, buddy. 🙂
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Just wow..
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Thank you 🙂 Glad to see you around.
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Lol…its a big complement.
I love to be around.
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Super 🙂
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Aaha…you are so sweet saying soo..
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That was lovely…
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Bahut khoob Asha. Babul ki aangan chod Kar, phir sasural ko apne hazoro sapne se sawarne chali❤️
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Thank you, Radhika. Yes, true that. Amazing isn’t it how many lives women live in a lifetime? 🙂
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Hi Asha, would it be better if you add a translation of the poem? I would be happy to read how you portray it in English than in Google translate 🙂
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Yes, Onie. I am in the process of doing that. It appears tad difficult than it seemed at first.
I shall notify you once I post the translation. Sorry that you may have to wait a bit. 😦
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