would it matter
if the rising sun was purple
the sinking moon amber
if what we cried were not salted tears
but only plain water
would it matter
if meadows were black and storms mellow
if elephants chirped and squirrels bellowed
if lions were striped and zebras spotted
if we walked backward to reach ahead
would it matter
if trees were white
and the clouds raining down on them green
if day started at dusk and
night tiptoed at dawn
would it matter
if life started when we died
and ceased to be
with the birth of a child
would it matter?
would it?
~~~~~
Asha Seth
You’ve really got me thinking here
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No words to say about you poem
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🙂
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You describe and up-side-down world for sure. Unfortunately things that should matter are of no concern to far too many people these days. We’ve lost empathy and much that matters is mere self gratification.
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Thoughtful …
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The mysterious ways the mind works.
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Beautiful, always accompanied by a stunning picture like all your posts!
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Thank you very much. I am always very peculiar; almost up to the point of an OCD, about the pictures that follow by posts. That also proves you notice a great deal. Super!
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Merlin, the wizzzzard, … was born in the future, and lived a reverse life (I was told) — you could ask him … if he’s already born in this epoch 🙂 [your articles are always a great read — thank you]
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Ohmygosh them chillss.
This is beautiful 🖤
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Thank you! Always fascinated to know your views. 🙂
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This is very very nice way of putting words ..enjoyed this
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That’s a great thing to know. Lovely.
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As long as there were words to record such things I would be happy.
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Guess me too. Else all will be lost to nothing and that’d be mighty sad.
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This is just wonderful🙌
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Thanks, Adi. Hope you’ve been well.
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So lot of pondering and thoughts ..on whts all around us
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Indeed and I wonder what occupies my days. 😛
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It really doesn’t when you reach “that” state where you realise it’s all the exact same. Now getting “there” is an altogether different matter! 🙂
Lovely write, liked your string of thought and the words you’ve woven!
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After a period of re-adjustment probably not, humans and animal can and do adapt!
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I agree.
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Never …so beautifully written and convincing my girlish mind…
Happy Birthday for 25 Aug Asha Didi ..I don’t know exactly but I feel I should wish.
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Thank you, Kiran. Yes, it was 25th August.
How have you been?
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Fine …concentrating on Combined Defence Services Exam …Indian Airforce Academy is my dream institution where I dream to fly high and high
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That’s ambitious. Good luck. Keep soaring.
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Wow!
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Thanks for stopping by, Sakina.
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Such flawless prose and fodder for thought on what ifs offering depth and intensity weaved by a sensitive heart!
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Of late, my head is full of things that do not exist, and will never will.
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We are in same boat…so many things that we make out in the head!
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Intellectual thoughts.
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Thank you, Jyotirmoy.
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Wow👌👍
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🙂
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It’s so beautiful!!
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Happy to have you here at TMQ. I hope you enjoy your time around. 🙂
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No it wouldn’t matter at all cause we are living in a dream world, so why bother. Lovely poem, Asha.
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Thanks, Kamal. If only nothing mattered, and we could be the way we wish to.
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Yes I agree with your words, Asha. Welcome always.
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This is an excellent poem. Very nice. I do not often bookmark poems and re-read them later, but I will do so with this one.
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That is mighty humble of you. Delighted to remain in your thoughts via the reshare. 🙂
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Nah, I wouldn’t matter!
But, this is the best poem I’ve read today 👏
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Thanks, Abhishek. 🙂
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