Once upon a time, somewhere in the vast open sky, an assembly was summoned. The biggest and brightest of stars took the senior positions in the assembly. Then the smaller stars took to lower rungs and the meeting commenced.
Speculation was rife that the moon; who had conveniently chosen to stay away from the meeting under the pretence of PreWaxing Syndrome (PWS), had yet again committed adultery with one of the younger stars, the night before.
The young star was called afore the assembly and asked if she had sauntered off with the moon on new moon day. She nodded. She was asked if she knew what she was doing to which she said yes. Then she was asked if, on new moon day, the moon had taken advantage of her or forced her? She shook her head. The crowd of stars gasped with horror at such impudent confession. Some others who harbored a secret lifelong crush for the moon paled with jealousy.
“Why, she doesn’t even shine that great? Why, surely she must’ve have lured him into it, that insolent tramp?” They thought. But most importantly they wondered why it was that the moon chose her as the object of his affections when they were the stronger contenders.
Then the brightest and oldest of the stars called out amidst the commotion. “Surely, you know the punishment for such an offense?” she asked the young star. At that, the young star paled some more and her light diminished some more.
“Shoot her down the Moon Door!” demanded the angry crowd. “Yes, shoot her, shoot her!” The little star trembled at the outburst.
The senior-most star, who until now had adored the young little star, went weak in the knees. She had raised her from a baby only to be witness to this day, to banish her to hell. But law was law. It had to be done.
She came forward and began, “The convicted has confessed to the crime before the court of law and stands deserving of its consequences,” she paused. “Eternal Exile!” she exhaled and walked away. The judgement was passed, the assembly concluded.
The guard stars pulled a lid off the ground which opened into the vast black sky. The young star came forward. She whispered, “I will always love you, my darling moon.” And out she jumped.
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Some 8700 miles below, a small girl looking out the window saw the shooting star and jumped in excitement. Only the wish upon a falling star could get her that red bike her parents refused her.
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For thousands of years, many stars have fallen for the moon’s mesmerizing beauty and committed the inexcusable crime condemned by veteran stars in the sky. The punishment for which is only one – banishment. These shooting stars bear upon their heart undying love for the moon and embrace exile, while the moon saunters on. That, dear reader, is how shooting or falling stars came into being.

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That’s a great story. The way you tell a story is just so beautiful!
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Its interesting!
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Great post. I haven’t checked you blog in ages but I’m glad I came back to this. We’d love to have you back commenting on rinse.
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Beautiful narration. I enjoyed reading this story, Asha.
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O what a tale you have spun! My shooting star wishes haven’t ever come true but now i know why they fall. Enjoyed reading you again! 🙂
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Haha. Thanks for reading. I enjoyed writing this one. I hope to see you around soon.
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My pleasure. You will see more of me now!😁
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Awesome.
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That’s a beautiful story…. The plot was refreshing
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Thank you very much. I am so happy you enjoyed reading it.
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Fun little story. I like the theme and reversal at the end. Well done 👍
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Thank you, Dennis. I often try to twist things to see if it turns out more interesting. This one was a favorite experiment gone well. 😛 I’m glad you stopped by.
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Surprisingly reflective of reality – the moon continues unaffected while society completely condemns the little star.
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Yeah. I am happy for your moral of the story, which indeed is reflective of our present-day societies, irrespective of the cultures we follow.
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Wow! The idea is amazing
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Thanks, Meghna.
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Beautifully written, and in agreement with previous comments I also imagine the moon to be a symbol of femininity so it is a refreshing change. A really wonderful piece.
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Thank you very much. Always trying to write out of the box. 😛
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Amazingly original.
Great story.
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Thanks, Lucia. I hope you’ll share your thoughts on the other stories too. 🙂
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This wonderful story caused me to twinkle, glow, and beam with pleasure!! 🌟🌕😊
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Thanks, Mark. That means a lot. 🙂
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I never would have thought of shooting stars in that way. I love the complete different twist on it. I enjoyed it very much! I’m following you!
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Sometimes, some stories dazzle the writer. This one was that story for me. I am so very delighted to know you loved it so.
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Interesting story Asha.
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Thank you very much, Rekha ji.
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welcome dear.
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How are you doing? Aapki kavitayein bahot hi achi lagti hai hamein.
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i am ok, dhanyvad Asha.
mai vahi likhti hu jo zindagi diktati hai. ya kuch padhti hun to use shabdo me likh deti hun.
tumhare write-up mujhe bahut pasand hai.
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Wohi hai sahi maaynon mein ek zindadil kavi.
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Shukriya Asha.
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Loved it.
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I am so happy to know, Priya. 🙂 Maybe you’ll like some of my other concoctions too.
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Great as always 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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Adding my voice in agreement with the other comments: yes, I enjoyed reading it. I am now following.
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Delighted to meet you, Roy. Following you back.
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Loved it 🙂
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Pleased to know, love.
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❤
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Not bad considering the Moon is associated with femininity. The Moon Goddess and the Sun God etc. It was a good read. 🌚🌛
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There are beliefs and there’s that thing called imagination. Somehow, I’ve never been able to think of the Moon in the feminine.
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Well your view is definitely not wrong, and its a different way of looking at it. 😃
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Asha, I wish I found your masterpieces earlier, You confounded me with your sheer brilliance and flair of your prepossessing words.I am from now an ardent admirer of your works.
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Thanks, Neha. That’s the best thing I’ve read this early in the year. This humble servant is furthermore humbled. I hope my blog helps you find whatever you’re hoping to find. 🙂
P.S.: I found your email and will reply shortly.
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This story stunning me!
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Glad!
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This is also cool! Good Read! Send some love! Happy writing
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Thanks, Devon. Happy to meet you. All swell?
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A differently imaginative take on shooting stars😊very fresh. Loved it😊
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Pleased to know you loved it. Always trying my best to have better stories written. 🙂
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This is brilliant!
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Thank you very much indeed!
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Loved it
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Thank you!
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What a bittersweet yet beautiful story! Fantastic storytelling. Keep up the gorgeous work.
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Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I am not finding the right word to say.. Just brilliant.. You are a great story teller..
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That’s the best thing to hear. Thanks, Karthika.
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Very beautiful
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Thanks, Shaziya. Happy new year to you!
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Very creative, with a strong message! loved it.
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Thank you, Rinum. You can check out other stories too.
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sure will do!
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This story is really amazing!! I enjoyed reading it. You should certainly read some of my short stories. Kindly read and let me know your views on them. Thank You.
The Pleasant Lie https://thoughtsoftharun.wordpress.com/2018/07/22/the-pleasant-lie-of-charm/
The Abandoned Hamlet https://thoughtsoftharun.wordpress.com/2018/04/21/the-abandoned-hamlet/
Mystery of History: Short story https://thoughtsoftharun.wordpress.com/2018/03/24/mystery-of-history-short-story/
The entry into darkness https://thoughtsoftharun.wordpress.com/2018/03/24/the-entry-into-darkness/
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I shall, surely, in due time. Thank you for stopping by and sharing the links. 🙂
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I really appreciate your style of writing so much freedom in it.
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Thanks, Neroshi. Writing is supposed to leave you feeling liberated.
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No problem. I totally agree
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What a lovable story! I will never look at the shooting stars the same way as before 🙂
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That’s a really beautiful thing, to know about how much a reader appreciates your work. Thank you!
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That was amazing and unique and creative! I’ve been stunned by your story. 😵
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Thank you, Sheikha. I am blown by your comment. Thanks a tonne!
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One of the best aetiological stories I’ve read.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked. 🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you.
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Awesome story my dear friend.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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A story with an inspirational message. I enjoyed reading it!
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I’m happy to know. Thank you, Patricia. 🙂
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Very beautiful and mesmerising concept💕💕💕
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Thank you, Afreen.:)
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I love this sooo much!!
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Thanks, Johanna.
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Wowwwww.this is superb asha..loved it…😍😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥
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Thank you, Kalyan. 🙂
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Wow…. Such a different interpretation drafted with beautifully chosen emotions!
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Thank you very much, Swati. Welcome to TMQ. 🙂
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Wow what a beautiful creative work of fiction. Very nice
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Happy to see you around, Ravi. How have you been?
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Beautiful creative writing !
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Thank you!
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Even while dying, a shooting heartbroken star fulfills others wishes. How beautiful is that ?
Nicely penned.
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Absolutely, don’t you think? So sad and so stunning still. Thank you! 🙂
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Agree
You are welcome 😊
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Wow. So you live in Sweden?
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Yes 😊
In Stockholm
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Where do you live
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I stay in Mumbai, India. How is Stockholm? Is it winters, there?
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Nice !!
It’s beautiful and full of natural beauty
Yes winters. Got first snow of winter yesterday. -3 already and it’s going to get colder in next few months. It’s like walking in the fridge outside 😂
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Wonderful story!
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Thank you, Jennie.
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You’re welcome, Asha
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Great story! I almost passed up on reading this, but I’m glad I took the time to do so. I really enjoyed it
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I am happy to know that it was worth your time, Charlie. Thank you for stopping by.
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This story is legendary. Great imagination.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Great piece… Well penned. It is beautified with beautiful words and the flow is awesome… Liked it… 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words, Ashish. Means a lot to writers when such motivation is passed on.
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The mere sight of your name is enough to excite me and reading this confirms my thrill.
Beautifully written Asha. The power of love and the moon is something to die for.
Hope to see you again and soon Asha
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Thank you, Kurian. Reading from you always makes you happy for you’ve got a kind heart. I love the moon much and always write around it. 🙂
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Great Asha. Looking forward to seeing you more often here
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Wow. Correlation is awesome. Who said science is not their in stories and poetries.
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Please enlighten further. I guess I am missing a big part of your expression here.
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I mean from sky to the girl in window . Same scene , different views
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Oh yes, that. I failed to see the connection at first. Reminds me that what may seem one thing to someone, may be totally different for someone else. It’s a matter of perspectives, so to say.
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So beautiful. It takes a special kinda talent to be able to write so profoundly 🙂
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Thank you, Pavithra. 🙂
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Wonderful words!
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Thank you, Mr Marsh.
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what a creative story !!!! marvelous.
Beautiful presentation.
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Thank you, Jyotirmoy.
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Absolutely enthralling tale Asha and stars meeting moon and an innocent girl. Fab!
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Thanks, Vishal. 🙂 I loved how the words formed a tale; just naturally, without much effort, once the seed was sown in my mind.
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Wow, what a great story, lovely story. You are a awesome story teller.
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Thanks, Vishal.
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Loved the thought of the story Asha and you are an adept story teller 🙂
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Thanks, Radhika. You do know how much I like it to have you around, and to hear from you is pure pleasure. 🙂 How’ve you been?
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Lovely story!!! Of course you know why all the stars fall in love with moon right? Because its just a reflection of starlight. It’s just starlight bouncing of the moon’s surface illuminating it. So it’s just stars falling in love with the reflection of themselves! Loved it ❤️❤️❤️
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I do. Delighted to know you liked it.
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Damn, it was good! Such a mesmerizing style! *.*
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Thank you very much. Happy to have you over. 🙂
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You are a great story teller ! Keep it up 🙂
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Thank you, Mani. Have a splendid week!
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What a lovely idea!
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Thanks, Matthew. Glad to see you around after so long. Hoping all’s well. How have you been?
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Enthralling story, so far this is the best thing I have read on internet this year!!!
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That’s the best compliment in the history of this blog. Thank you very very much. 🙂 Hope to see you around.
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