I wanted to run and hide
and then
I turned and saw
what was chasing me
was also
what was leading me
that I was following it
with all my heart
then what was it
that I didn’t feel mine
or was it
what I was living for
endlessly
even beyond time
I couldn’t tell
I’ll never find
because I was walking down
an end with no road
because I was looking at
an earth with no sky
~~~~~
Asha Seth
Wow Asha.
Just wow.
There’s something unique about the way you’ve written this.
It’s flowing, continously, yet faintly broken in parts.
And oh the theme, the message between the lines and how you’ve weaved it together.
All of it just comes together to form a stunning piece! 💜
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This is amazing
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Thanks, Girija.
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My pleasure dear
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“….an end with no road
because I was looking at
an earth with no sky”
Beautifully weaved lines in this soul-stirring poem, Asha and flirting with minds. Magnificent!
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As a reader, what does it evoke in your mind? Tell me all, Vishal.
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This is so nice!
Btw, why did you change your blog’s name from TMQ to Asha’s Blog?
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Never did! Sorry, bit late in replying.
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Is it? Cause now when I view your post in reader then it shows the blog name as Asha’s Blog instead of TMQ
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THERE IS MAGIC IN YOUR WORDS.I NOT ONLY READ IT BUT FEEL IT.AMZING WORK.KEEP IT UP….
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Thanks, indeed.
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What a earth…!
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Really? What’s it mean to you?
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As per my opinion world is gift of God. So enjoy life and live with nature.
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Lovely.
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Thank you!
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