When I gave you that book
I gave you more than I could
And who knew
what future held
But I believed in us
And it went without saying
that I loved you
more than you deserved
I didn’t know what to do
When you said you couldn’t meet me
on your birthday, that you had to go away
I trusted your eyes, those words,
and when you were gone
I ransacked every place I could
to get the best gift there was
And I happened by this book
which had my heart, my life
I wrapped it with all my love
as I wrote ‘To the best I know, the best of me’
I wondered what you were doing
as I stopped by your place
to surprise you before you left
but what an irony
when I was given a surprise myself
by your gardener, a seventy year oldie
seems, you’d never left, nor were going to
that you had a grand party
with friends and ex-lovers too
I was offered a ride that I promptly denied
with rage in my head and tears in my eyes
I turned to leave
but not before I parted with what I had to give
I asked your gardener for a penly favor
he said he had none and gave me a pencil
One last look beyond the shimmering parapet
realising not everything that glitters is gold
I tore off the foolish display of my affections
and signed ‘P. S. I don’t love you’, instead.
~~~~~
Asha Seth
Brilliant
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Thank you for stopping by , Anil. How have you been?
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Strong stuff, I really felt this. Brilliant.
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Thanks, J. I am happy you like it.
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Sounds like a story I know…. 🙁
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Really? How do you mean? Personal?
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Just a very similar situation once happened to me. It’s hard when you think somebody loves you and they really don’t.
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Amazing how you kept the flow going with a superb yet secretive ending. Keep up the good work.
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Awesome observation, Kalyan. I intend to keep doing it.
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Keep the emotions flowing 🙂
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Heartbreaking but I like that it has no anger or nastiness in it. Beautiful language.
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I tried to keep it light whilst retaining the emotions. I’m glad it worked.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you very much.
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Waao…even the heartbreak can be progressive…I read the title and I knew I am going to love this writing and I did.
Well done Asha👍
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Haha! Yes, not every time it has to be tears and melodrama!
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Sometimes, poetry is enough to tell a story. I love poems when they tell stories.
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So do I. I love write free style poetry that is why.
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😊
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Beautiful!
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Thanks, Robin.
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